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  1. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 15 Wake Up? Hiro looked up, yet...

    Chapter 15 Wake Up?

    Hiro looked up, yet everything disappeared into darkness only one mysterious person remained behind

    Mystery person: I'm Sir Justin, trapped in this domain. Could only lure...
  2. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 14 Their Nest? "Ok, were here," Ren...

    Chapter 14 Their Nest?

    "Ok, were here," Ren parked his white car.

    They got out of the car and walked up to the building.

    Hiro noticed there were cracked walls and some broken stained glass...
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    :hi Thanks for continuing the story. ^^

    :hi Thanks for continuing the story. ^^
  4. Thread: Choices

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    :Ikhan_Teary_eyes Thank You so much!

    :Ikhan_Teary_eyes Thank You so much!
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    Thank You! :blush I will work on the next...

    Thank You! :blush I will work on the next chapter. :happyrun
    I'm planning on doing both, continuing the Choices story as I wait, and working on the next sequel with Sachula when we are both free at...
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    :hi Please do continue, I like reading your...

    :hi Please do continue, I like reading your story. ^^
  7. Thread: Choices

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    Thank You so much for your feedback!...

    Thank You so much for your feedback! :happyrun:happyrun:happyrun I really appreciated it of being informed of how I am doing so far in the storyline because now I know that I'm heading in the right...
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    Chapter 13 Brown Cross? Upon hearing birds...

    Chapter 13 Brown Cross?

    Upon hearing birds chirped outside room 106, Hiro flipped over to his side trying to get more sleep. A dagger impaled through a pillow where his head laid a few seconds...
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    Congratulations Ibizen Thoth, and mangafan! ^^ I...

    Congratulations Ibizen Thoth, and mangafan! ^^ I hope you will continue it.
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    As I read it, I sense that maybe be only in the...

    As I read it, I sense that maybe be only in the beginning the main character would feel very unfortunate until a disaster event happened that stirred his heart. The part of him that even he is...
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    :happyrun I really appreciated it that you took...

    :happyrun I really appreciated it that you took the time to critique the Topaz story, and helped us with the ideas in the next sequel. ^o^ It’s very helpful! Thank You! ^ ^
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    I believe the next sequel creation will also...

    I believe the next sequel creation will also leave me confused just like Topaz because I don't know the boundary of whose idea belongs to who anymore, it's all meshed in like mash potatoes. XD

    I...
  13. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 12 Responsibility? Hiro waited till he...

    Chapter 12 Responsibility?

    Hiro waited till he could no longer hear Kuro's footsteps. “Kurenai, why did you called him a traitor?”

    “Kuro used to agree with me, but he later abandoned my belief,...
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    Please do continue.:tearyeyes

    Please do continue.:tearyeyes
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    It's enlightening, interesting, cute, and...

    It's enlightening, interesting, cute, and hilarious. XD I couldn't stop laughing. XD Thanks for sharing it! ^^
  16. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 11 Strength and Freedom? Kuro knocked...

    Chapter 11 Strength and Freedom?

    Kuro knocked on the glass window, and leaped over it, “So have you decided yet,”

    “Nearby the alley, why did you kill Sakura?”

    “Ah so you've remembered,” he...
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    About chapters 6-10, I wasn't sure how I was...

    About chapters 6-10, I wasn't sure how I was doing before. Thank You! Now I feel even more motivated to continue this story. :happyrun:happyrun:happyrun
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    Chapter 10 Truth? “Hey, why are you staring...

    Chapter 10 Truth?

    “Hey, why are you staring so hard at that book,” Shin pulled up a chair and sat on it.

    Hiro turned his head looking at him with his red eyes..

    “Hiro....” Shin sighed, “So...
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    Thank You for your encouragement! :happyrun...

    Thank You for your encouragement! :happyrun Thank You for your feedback! :happyrun

    We narrowed it down to two people, and was wondering which person would you be interested as the main character...
  20. It's cute and funny! XD I hope this story...

    It's cute and funny! XD

    I hope this story will be continued.
  21. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 9 Utopia? Hiro blinked upon hearing...

    Chapter 9 Utopia?

    Hiro blinked upon hearing footsteps near him. It was Ren, who picked up a mythology book from a floor.

    “Good morning,” he brushed a dust off a book, and gently placed it on...
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    Chapter 8 Acceptance? Hikari walked out of the...

    Chapter 8 Acceptance?

    Hikari walked out of the black portal behind Hiro, and grinned evilly at him as she approached closer to him. She charged at him wih her right fist. Hiro turned around, and...
  23. Thread: Choices

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    Chapter 7 Struggles In Life? “My name is...

    Chapter 7 Struggles In Life?

    “My name is Kuro.”

    Hiro saw him grinned evilly from a side of his face, lit from a hallway, “What do you want from me?!”

    Kuro opened his arms wide, “Embrace...
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    Even though I'm a newbie at writing with a...

    Even though I'm a newbie at writing with a grammar and other problems, ^ ^; I still want to type my story because as I try to create a story, pictures popped into my mind like I'm watching an...
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    The society changed living under the seas to...

    The society changed living under the seas to retreat from the consequences of global warming, it's very interesting!:geme
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