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    Contestant [Kiisa]

    Hello,
    I decided to paticipate again. I hope you'll like it :D
    I used photoshoop to draw everything (without a tablet :) )
    Though, I have the feeling that something is wrong with it. Feel free to criticize and help me improve it :D


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    - Artwork name: Autumn
    - Your website: http://kiisah.deviantart.com
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    (I'm trying to draw four of them and each one of them is supposed to resemble a season.
    and for a better quality picture (this one seems a bit blurry) see on deviantart: http://kiisah.deviantart.com/#/d5bj9w7 )

    - Artwork name: Spring
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    (http://kiisah.deviantart.com/#/d5da6p9)
    Last edited by Kiisa; 09-06-2012 at 08:55 PM.

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    Really wonderful shading and color on her, Kiisa
    I love the ribbon around her--it's beautifully done. And the bird is really nice :) Love the detail work in the panels behind her

    Proportionally, she is a bit off--everything below her waist is slightly larger than it should be, considering the size of her head, but I think the most noticeable thing would be the size and rotation of her feet. That's all I can think of for critique: she is really well done

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    i really like your concept of drawing four different gods to represent the four seasons. that's a really creative idea

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    I love your work Kiisa :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafan View Post
    Really wonderful shading and color on her, Kiisa
    I love the ribbon around her--it's beautifully done. And the bird is really nice :) Love the detail work in the panels behind her

    Proportionally, she is a bit off--everything below her waist is slightly larger than it should be, considering the size of her head, but I think the most noticeable thing would be the size and rotation of her feet. That's all I can think of for critique: she is really well done

    Thank you very much :D
    I tried to change the legs how does that look like? (I posted it next to the old one)

    Quote Originally Posted by pok3ydot View Post
    i really like your concept of drawing four different gods to represent the four seasons. that's a really creative idea
    thank you I hope I'll manage to draw all four of them :D

    Quote Originally Posted by EAM View Post
    I love your work Kiisa :)
    thank you as well :)

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    It looks much more proportional
    Good job on the rotation of her feet too!

    It's really beautiful; I can't wait for the other three~

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafan View Post
    It looks much more proportional
    Good job on the rotation of her feet too!

    It's really beautiful; I can't wait for the other three~
    thank you :D


    and tatatatatara (I'm in a working flow.. :D)
    here is the next one:

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    it is still missing a few details (like the face :S) but it's pretty much completed :D
    Again critique is welcome :D

    And I am wondering, do you think the head is to big?
    Also I wanted this one to be Summer, but it seams much more like spring right? Maybe I should change their seasons...

    edit: the one on the right is the finished one :D
    Last edited by Kiisa; 08-20-2012 at 12:38 PM.

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    Based on the color schemes, I'd say this one looks more like spring, and the "spring" one looks autumnal.
    Sorry if that's not what you're going for, just the yellow tones in the first one remind me of fall.

    The head doesn't look too big.

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    I agree with mangafan. The first one suits autumn and the second one should be spring. Her head size is fine but her right leg, from that perspective, should look shorter and a little thinner than the left since it is further away.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafan View Post
    Based on the color schemes, I'd say this one looks more like spring, and the "spring" one looks autumnal.
    Sorry if that's not what you're going for, just the yellow tones in the first one remind me of fall.

    The head doesn't look too big.
    haha, no, that was what I was thinking about as well, I didn't really think about their colours when I drew them and more about their positions... I'm going for autumn and spring :D


    Quote Originally Posted by pok3ydot View Post
    I agree with mangafan. The first one suits autumn and the second one should be spring. Her head size is fine but her right leg, from that perspective, should look shorter and a little thinner than the left since it is further away.
    okay, I tried to change that. (see the upper post) What do you think, is it still to big?
    Last edited by Kiisa; 08-20-2012 at 12:40 PM.

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