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    Aurora's Poems

    Ok, I really need to practise some poetry because it's a potential project I can do for my degree ._.

    So I'll post random ones I do here, and please review them and give feedback!

    Also post what you think they're about (some will be quite obvious) but I always like to hide some themes in them as well

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    Of Hearts and Minds

    Links the soul to the body; the heart to the mind
    Claiming the teachings of old to be left behind
    Reviewing the scriptures and power of the Word
    Inflicting more damage than a shield or a sword

    Two clashing sides with a common divine father
    Revolutions of souls unlike any other
    For when will this ancient war ever truly quell?
    And ne’er to the ones above our souls we will sell

    If one watches over us, is this His desire,
    To bicker and fight, and bow to every high sire,
    To depend on ghostly workings of the unknown,
    And refute the answers that are already shown?

    If so, I condemn this life to be meaningless
    As for who, and why I had to sadly confess,
    Partook in ceremonial theatre acts
    And blindly accepted those beliefs as true facts?

    Why linger in the shade and cold with hurting knees,
    Glancing at the coloured rays infiltrating these
    Godly tall towers dominating all the town
    And forever being dictated to bow down?

    Why not explore the answer to the Earth’s problem?
    Find ourselves a solution; not remain fallen.
    Why dwindle over a depressing ancient thought
    When a new way of life is here that has been sought?

    I, for one, believe in this life
    Even with tyranny and strife
    Never will the good turn rotten
    Not to ever be forgotten.

    Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.


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    This was really good, made me think. XD

    And now, from the first parts, I'm wondering if this was that poem you mentioned. *smirks*

    Write more if you get around to it.


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    I think the one you're talking about is the one I did for Heroes of Spring and Autumn XD

    That's not here hehe~

    But thank you, Lemmie~!

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    Okay, I was thinking. XD

    You're welcome Aurora.


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    Good Job!

    I look forward to seeing more.

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    Thank you, 77!

    I wrote that when I was studying history... (or when I was meant to be studying) XD

    So I was full of inspiration then

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