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    OK, so I read it.
    I really like the general idea, and I like that you didn't just describe an ordinary world but the one with such ominous sky, it added a lot to the general atmosphere.
    And I also like the older brother, it's generally surprising that he had something warm left in him, with such father. So far the kindest character)
    Will you continue it beyond the contest?
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    yes i'm continuing because still a lot to write :) i only finished for the contest in the words count limit and how wanted destiny a cliffhanger

    glad you like it because this is a re-write of some ides and fragments had on my notebook for a time....just change few stuff
    and yes he is
    sadly he never showed it to his brother much because was also scared of his father :O


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    It is so dark but emotional!
    Poor Saphir, going through so much pain and suffering wanting to be considered and treated like any other human being
    Looking forward to read the continuation of your story Good luck for the contest!

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    thank u
    though lol i'm on 12 k+now
    and Saphir was the last time seen at the en of my entry rolf
    i must start again his part

    half of my continuation is on my DA posted


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    I must read
    The atmosphere reminds me of Kafka books it is what caught my interest ^^
    I'll continue mine also.
    Good luck, I'm glad the contest enticed you to write again :)

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    thank you for the comment on DA much appreciated
    sadly never read any of Kafka work but glad that gives you a vibe then
    looking forward with your continuation
    so do i
    i was like before "i'll ever write prose any soon"
    and then bang - inspiration


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    As always i love that dark and emotional atmosphere in your stories
    I must read again Kafka and discover more of his works, I studied one of his books in high school back then :)
    I'm glad you found inspiration to write thanks to the contest.
    Thanks, it is still in progress I'll do my best to write a good continuation <3 I did some research beforehand for historical context and names ^^
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    glad you do because i also enjoy the dark theme in general
    i also enjoy a nice romance well written
    comedy but dark i feel sometime can bring more emotions :/
    or is just me

    oh well you should...that is nice
    i'm just sad i only got one vote lol but ya i did enjoyed/enjoy to write it

    tomorrow might add a second part
    is kinda 1k+
    more bl

    oh interesting can't wait no hurry though ...you might rush it :/
    research is always good


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    I feel that comedy, romance and darkness can stack together and give more strength to a story.

    Yes I will, it's a shame that I'm reading less books than I used to read younger o.o
    I know that feeling, just think about it you've done your best for the contest and that's the most important <3

    must read!

    For my part I'll take some more time to think and write it the way I want and not how the plot would carry me away to xDD
    I do want to give an historical Middle Age setting but with my own characters and plot.
    My law history course might help for historical references ^^
    All in good time you're right and I will try not to rush :)

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    true but usually i prefer a dark humor
    oh lol i suck writing romance stories
    but i tried once a comedy

    so do i
    i remember a summer i read over 25+books -.-
    was on my granny
    i even read my brother books he had to read from school

    true
    i did gave my best and love mys story
    but u know - writer pride

    soon...still didn't received the last part :/
    my "editor" is busy a bit

    hm well hat is good
    thinking is better than going with the flow and not like in the end
    for 3rd part i must think also

    oh that sound wonderful
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