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    Zen's iLLuMinus Poetry

    I'm good at poetry. read and comment as you want...




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    Snow falls and kisses the ground
    We all sing to this softest of sounds
    Our voices weigh from grams into pounds
    As we weave the gold for the kings and their crowns

    Come sing with us
    So the ashes did ask
    In you, we do trust
    With our crystal clear Hearts
    Don't shatter us
    As we disappear fast
    Cause we do as we must
    We have mastered this craft.

    This poem is about mistrusting people who are comfortable making friends but cautious about letting them close to them. Snow and glass both identifying fragility





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    Cold and distant
    Like the look in her eyes
    Dulled persistence
    Nearing the fullness of fires
    Pull though another
    It's not like it hurts
    Although we promised to protect each other
    I'm now used to the dirt
    Well, I'm sorry my lover
    But my heart will burst
    Although we loved one another
    I could be worse


    This one actually rings bell with a lot of people; first love and recovery from. And to note; it isn't a happy ending




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    Good Job, Zen-Zen!

    Do the colors have meaning?

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    Poetry hohohoho ♪ ~



    Fufu, I like your use of colors in your poems - a bit like a duo, two echoes answering each other...
    Wistful but filled with... (cou)rage... sweet and bitter... to keep moving forward and live on, maybe...?

    Deep and beautiful ♥ ~
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    Pooping flowers, throwing up roses
    Strange bloomers, my darling tuberoses ~
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    yeah, the colors add something more to the words

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    Today's letter of the day. R
    ....because of reasons
    miRRoRs

    Rivers Run wild marring any Reflection,

    Rainfalls heavy on the mistakes of insuRRection,
    RNeve did I know that my mistakes wouldcause Rdesecation,
    And yetthis feeling, a fReedom or sensation,
    What a woRld we live in to be the pRotection,
    Of the BastaRds and the Kings, who Rule with vindication.






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    Very thought provoking words.

    The thing you did with the R's and running words together throws off the rhythm a bit. Was that intentional?

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    Quote Originally Posted by SevenSeven View Post
    Very thought provoking words.

    The thing you did with the R's and running words together throws off the rhythm a bit. Was that intentional?
    a little. but i ran out of context xD




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