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    September Zodiac 2014 [madimb] : The Merry Old Land

    Hey ... Do you believe in magic ?
    Rather ironically, mainly written listening Avicii's song "Addicted to you" ...


    Lots of references to the (even songs' titles -o-) musical adapted movie of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz (originally written by L. Frank Baum), from 1939. 380 words & English mistakes exactly : isn't it rather cool ? *madi goes wild ~

    For the true Noblesse's hero, of course ♥ !


    *Eats a brain as snack waiting for "some" expected last-minute contestants to appear ...


    Spoiler
    The Merry Old Land

    When I was a young boy
    There was a tale I liked to hear
    Some kind of absurd fairytale - which moral was unclear

    As in old good stories, it started with a fantastic storm
    Ding ! Dong ! Over the rainbow - it really was no miracle
    Every certainty burnt to the ground
    Torn to shreds
    Burst to tears
    Total left : 0. Vain remain.
    Purification…

    Lightning ! Whirlwind ! Clean slate, second chance
    Such a refreshing concept
    Starting again from scratch, anew…
    Make new clothes, make new man !

    Some lone girl and her damned soul
    Walking on a endless gold road, hurting the eyes
    Direction ? Nowhere, a blurry dream
    Wisdom - blatant lie
    The savour of impossible...

    Empty heads, overflowing hearts
    - Blind despair as sole luggage (ah, the silliness of Hope)
    All insects want to touch the Sun
    But, heh, do you have what it takes ?

    In the ambush around the shining way
    Optimistic voices…
    Bones under the roses
    Traps under my footsteps
    Scalpels reflecting on your teeth, sharp smile
    So ? Come out, come out
    If you believe it could even slow me down

    Bad witches slaughtered without a second look
    Pity, forgiveness - beautiful words, pointless things
    Such a waste on you, pathetic stain on the show !
    My time is precious - if you’re not with me, at least be of some use
    Dear... seed
    You can only grow better, heh

    Illusions bursting like bubbles
    Your last gasp already ? Such disappointment !
    I’ll find, I’ll break my way through The fortress of your lies...
    From the greyness the colors were born
    And light, so much light
    The naked, dazzling beauty : Truth.

    Wish to burn them all - your old shadows to brighten my world
    Because, secrets are meant to be known
    No depth, no height out of my reach
    To become the only King of the... Forest (fu)
    Deny, as much you want
    - You can beg, you can crawl
    Swarm
    Since, inside, you know
    You know, you know I’m right

    If I only had a brain
    I’m too kind, so - let me lend you one (a great deal, truly)

    If I only had the nerve
    Blasting the curtain away
    Try, learn !

    If I only had a heart
    Believe me, I’ll make good use of yours
    Pooping flowers, throwing up roses
    Strange bloomers, my darling tuberoses ~
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    I don't quite understand it yet, although I'm picking up pieces here and there, but I think it's amazing! It's a bit like being in a parallel universe or Crombel's (?) world by the look of things. It's got a very story tale feel and I really enjoy the flavour of the text, kinda old fashioned.

    I'm curious about the girl is that Mary? The next paragraph I assume is when he begins experimenting?
    I really like the ending XD It's a nice play on words. ^^
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    Somehow I think of Arith as "bad witch"
    Madi goes wild indeed. Quite unexpected form and I really think of Crombel as young reading this. Now he is much more boring and focused on taking over the world (such unoriginal goal)
    I am rather impressive, yes. ©
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    Quote Originally Posted by madimb View Post

    [spoiler]The Merry Old Land

    When I was a young boy
    There was a tale I liked to hear
    Some kind of absurd fairytale - which moral was unclear

    As in old good stories, it started with a fantastic storm
    Ding ! Dong ! Over the rainbow - it really was no miracle
    Every certainty burnt to the ground
    Torn to shreds
    Burst to tears
    Total left : 0. Vain remain.
    Purification…
    Here I thought of Dark Spear and how it was created by the destruction of countless human lives.

    Quote Originally Posted by madimb;372896


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    Lightning ! [/COLOR]Whirlwind ! Clean slate, second chance
    Such a refreshing concept
    Starting again from scratch, anew…
    Make new clothes, make new man !

    Here I thought of Frankenstein when Rai "changed" his clothes.

    Quote Originally Posted by madimb View Post

    Some lone girl and her damned soul
    Walking on a endless gold road, hurting the eyes
    Direction ? Nowhere, a blurry dream
    Wisdom - blatant lie
    The savour of impossible...
    Here I thought of Mary.

    Quote Originally Posted by madimb View Post

    Empty heads, overflowing hearts
    - Blind despair as sole luggage (ah, the silliness of Hope)
    All insects want to touch the Sun
    But, heh, do you have what it takes ?
    This one reminded me of the M-Series of experiments.
    Last edited by SevenSeven; 10-04-2014 at 10:53 AM.

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    Aw, thank you, thank you all ~


    Moomoo ! He hee, I'm glad you could find the Crombell in it ! Crombell also thinks your brain is very flavoured ! He'd love to experiment it ♥ !


    My Queen
    , you there ♪ ! *wild madimb running from right to left wagging the tail *
    Aerith has a very "witchy" charm, indeed, fufufufu (the black nail polish also help--- er, nevermind ...) ~
    Crombell will always be young as he keeps such a refreshing goal ♫ (though I agree that experimenting on tragic is more fun, but you can't always having only the fun ...) !


    Oooooow
    !
    I quite like Mum77's reading ! Thank you a lot for your time *pleased pleased * !
    I like the Dark Spear & most importantly Rai idea's : in my mind, it kind of makes me feel better how Rai had to, somehow, create himself a new character to venture in this unknown world of him ...


    And of course, thanks to all who were brave enough to read me ♥ : Yuri loves you ~




    *Then, to satisfy an endless Moomoocuriosity : Random pieces of what I can remember while I was writing it :
    (Read only if you feel bored - anyway, I most of the time prefer to have each people reading it as he wants )
    Spoiler
    *Scratches scratches (Wait, should I put quotes ? But it would be quite long... Hm... Oh, well, this would go ...)


    So ! After the first stanz-... well, paragraph which is only an intro, about the second one : the storm, the miracle =
    First season : the ♥ beloved sexy blue zombie experiment kyaaaa (translation : the poor guy who was "infected" by M-24). So, nice experiment = super weakling levels up & M-21 faces an existencial crisis !!! And then, first lab's total destruction, Simon's death sniff sniff ...
    // Dorothy's house "takes flight" & crashes in Oz World, obviously far, far away from home .

    In a different form, for both M-21 and Dorothy, a brand new existence begins : they are both "adopted" by people from a world unknown of them.
    The main change is that M-21 receives pink slippers, when Dorothy are red *cough* ?

    Lightning ! Whirlwind ! - Wrath, and bold choices : making a new way.
    In my mind, I believe it was first more about the traitorous Clan Leaders : Clan Leaders = Black Clothes ~ MAGIC CRISTAAAAAL ~ >pof!< and hop, now Union Elders, our uniform turned ♦white♦ ! So don't wait a minute to buy our magical washing powd--...

    But Rai is so clever, indeed. After all, who needs washing powder when you are already a magical gir--boy--when you have a devoted Franken turning berserk in front of the tiniest stain ?!
    // And, of course, the unforgettable new Ruby Slippers Dorothy acquires, which marks the "important person" she became (WITCH MURDERER !).

    The lone girl was indeed Mary, the "damned soul" being Jake - but also Dorothy with... Toto... her d-dog ...
    The gold road because, er... Mary could hope for a promotion ?! *cough*
    *Madi dances on the famous yellow brick road ~*
    Then, following blindly orders - since anyway she can't escape, freedom's a mere dream // Dorothy goes on a Magician Quest ! Yea~ah ♪ !

    Nanananah
    --quick mention of various events & encounters, whatever being singing Scarecrow, Man of Iron or Lion ; Union Elders & caring... "doctors"...

    Two witches, who both receive quite silly ends (-.-) - as well as Aerith and... Taze.

    Hm, consequently... A metaphor - ah, there's nothing like a little one ♥ !
    Well, if personally I more interpreted the passage in the movie from black & white for the "real world" to colors for Oz as a reference to Imagination, here I replaced it by Truth, which seemed me a more Crombell-like concern.
    Why, you ask ? Because I could, ofc ! MUAHAHAHA !!! ()
    The quest for oneself remains, though...

    The King of the Forest, well, for the song
    ... Thumbs up for the next UnionKing - king of the wooooorld ! ROAR !
    *Noise of crunchy bones of dead rivals crisping under Crombell's heels, mUnion madimb carrying the flag trampling tragic, thank you, thank you ~

    Finally, direct quote of the chorus of the three most well-known songs of the movie, I think ? Heart~ Brain~ Nerve~
    If there was some kind of genie playing pranks & all was about chosing only one, I wonder which one would be the best ...?
    Hm... Maybe... A brain... Then I could make a delicious brain-cabbage soup (tragiiiii~c, where are youuuu~ ♥ ) ? Or a chocolate with brain, to boost your neurons ?!


    *Curtain falls ~*
    Last edited by madimb; 10-26-2014 at 09:21 PM. Reason: BRAINS ! There is never ever enough ♥brains♥ !
    Pooping flowers, throwing up roses
    Strange bloomers, my darling tuberoses ~
    ✿✿✿



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